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TylerDurden
Jul 17th, 2008, 05:20 AM
I sorta dug myself into a hole. I'm writing this essay in my writing class, thats a comparison and contract piece, about protesters, and politicians. Everyone seems to sorta be picking a side in their paper. I wanted to have no side, and leave the reader with the feeling that they should listen to themselves. My main focus is how both sides lie. Lies for the sake of good right ? Well, anyhoo i need to really develop on this, and its not very clear. I talked to my teacher for almost an hour after class the other day, and she gave me some pointers, and ideas where to go. The only problem is, after that i went home, did my math homework, went and skateboared, then smoked weed, then came home, and couldn't remember anything she said to me. Lame me.

ANYHOO im gonna just look down at this paper and type it out, so im not gonna worry to much about editing, i just wanna throw it up here, maybe someone could read it a little, help me out. Thanks.

The People Versus Politician's. Who's right ?

Protesters and politicians share many similarities, one of which would be lying. Both have negative and positive sides that almost hopelessly oscillate in limbo while the masses pick and choose, like at a salad bar.

protesters have a unique charisma about the way they lie. Egotistically assuming they are the white on the ying yang, they have the ability to believe their own propaganda. Efficient at producing results, the protesters demand a side to be taken, which naturally induces emotion, leaving the victim bias, and artificially opinionated.

protesters complain a lot about main stream media, which I believe correlates into the government on many different levels. What protesters fail to understand is that as long as they live in this country, there is a cheese burger being made every second, at Macdonald's, JUST for them. And as long as they live in America, the government will continue to generate the economy in the direction that best suites the needs of the highest dollar, and concentrates on the well being of investors, and the like, rather then the well being of the trees and mountain sides. The government is going to do what needs to be done to insure its constant flow of power. This is something that has been in motion since the first white settlers of this country, who founded America on piracy.

If you don't like how this country is being run, then move to another one. Just because you protest, doesn't mean the government is going to stop what its doing. Rather then being annoying for everyone else, just go live somewhere that isn't based on greed and secrets. Its best to understand, rather then just know. I understand why the government works the way it does (TMH actually i don't) and in turn I live with it. Once ive reached the point in which i actually hate the government, then its my right as an American to move. and move I shall.

All Mainstream politicians are liars. Politics is the art of determining how organized force is to be used in society.

Every democratic president since woodrow wilson, and every republican president since Herbert Hoover, has increased the size and power of the federal government. And with that, comes less concern for the environment, and not to mention human lives.

Unfortunately America has a hard time coming to terms with the fact that more weapons are produced in the United States, and sold worldwide, then anywhere else on earth. (TMH totally pulled that out my ass. Is that true ? lol) An expert in propaganda, America manifests solutions, using economic resources, such as firearms. (TMH do fire arms count as economic resources ?) Soon after the problem is then stated, only to be met with the solution.

"fueled by surging sales, the u.s firearm business has reached a solid, robust level. All indicators point to an energized industry, with the u.s firearm manufacturers, reporting increased production to meet the growing demand of the marketplace. distributors and importers are enjoying brisk business and dealers indicate a surge in firearm sales"

"the firearm industry today as all the markers for continued growth. In addition, the industry has a record of successes in political and legislative battles. "

The government should be upfront in its doings, and never hide the fact that if it wasn't for pirate mentality, this country would maybe still belong to the Indian, and we'd all be in england, drinking tea. Or something like that.
In conclusion, I feel that a lot of people are clueless to how the world turns. Rather then trying to shut something down, due to it being the opposite of what you think, I just wish they would go the extra mile to actually, not just know. This can be applied to both protesters and politicians. Like i sad, they both share many similarities, which is maybe why no one can seem to get along. Despite what protesters think, you can't stop hundreds of years of blood lines, and despite what politicians think, you can't over look the generators of the economy. "They've got the guns, but we've got the triggers" - D.I


So thats my paper ! This is my second essay in this class. My first one landed me a B+, so naturally i wanna shoot for an A-, A, or A+.... meaning i don't feel good handing this essay in, please help.

Burris
Jul 17th, 2008, 05:22 AM
It's too rambling, and lacks any proper sentence structure. You turn in stuff like this?

TylerDurden
Jul 17th, 2008, 05:25 AM
No. My last paper was really good, I wrote a page a day for a week, and edited over the weekend. Turned out good. You're right, thats why i can't turn this in, its too messy, and im burnt out. This is maybe my 3rd rough draft.

is it too out there ? How much of it is totally erroneous ?

Stroddy
Jul 17th, 2008, 05:26 AM
The government should be upfront in its doings, and never hide the fact that if it wasn't for pirate mentality, this country would maybe still belong to the Indian, and we'd all be in england, drinking tea. Or something like that. http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/6325/facepalmstgu1.gif

TylerDurden
Jul 17th, 2008, 05:29 AM
LMAO

you have no idea. You have no idea.

My teacher did the same thing. It was more of a picard.

Maxey
Jul 17th, 2008, 11:08 AM
Ask Swordfish, he knows everything.

Puddle
Jul 17th, 2008, 04:04 PM
, then smoked weed, then came home, and couldn't remember anything she said to me. Lame me.

ANYHOO im gonna just look down at this paper and type it out, so im not gonna worry to much about editing, i just wanna throw it up here, maybe someone could read it a little, help me out. Thanks.

The People Versus Politician's. Who's right ?



Therin lies your problem.

Take a good look at precedence when writing a paper like this. Bewfore WW2 there were demonstrations against going to war. Vietnam is a great example. What about Iraq?
Take a good look at some of the reasons people demonstrate and you can see a pattern. We as westerners are so complacant in our world we sort of "Expect" things. Sometimes it's downright stupid. Like the guy holding a sign that says. "I don't need oil I take the bus." :picard: .
The major problem is politicians feel they need to make our decisions for us like banning oral sex. Considering I'm puttin a nice little tormenting email for the finance minister here on the current carbon tax, which is Revenue neutral (FUCK OFF!), I can say this.
Politicians are greedy pocket lining pieces of lying shit.
Protesters are ignorant self centered babies.
:orly:

TylerDurden
Jul 17th, 2008, 04:13 PM
totally.


pretty much, im over this fucking essay. I now have a total of 6 rough drafts, all of which suck dick. I stayed up so fucking late last night trying to rewrite this shit, and couldn't come up with anything, so this morning i slept through my alarm clock, missed the bus, missed my writing class. Fuck it, i'll turn this bull shit essay in on monday. what really pisses me off, is that im the only one in my class writing about something other then fucking frogs or toads, cats and dogs, hairspray vs hair gel, FUCKING STUPID SHIT, and now here iam, totally willing to write about some crap like the pros and cons between macs and pc's. FUCKING SHIT.

i ripped my alarm clock out of the wall, and by the cord smashed it on the ground until it was nothing but the cord. now i have to buy a new alarm clock.

Puddle
Jul 17th, 2008, 04:33 PM
Another thing you can look at is celebrities and the protests they do. I just want to piss on em all sometimes. Pamela Anderson on animal rights attacking kentucky fried chicken when they are the main sponsor for the show she was on.

Here's a good story. I was walking to work downtown and outside the gap was Chrissie Hynde from the pretenders. She was there to protest leather. Ok the bitch wore it all through the 70's but now that she's ritch and has people to wipe her ass it's wrong to skin a cow.

I had on a leather coat (A hand me down from my brother, I couldn't drop $500.00 on a coat. And a pair of $20 dress shoes(THAT WERE NOT LEATHER BUT LOOKED LIKE IT). See the bitch looked at me like she wanted to kill me. Alll I was doing was heading to my lame ass job for 12 bucks an hour. A dress code was in effect at the office. But no I'm an evil person because I've got a cow on my back.

Fuck you and your servents Chrissie Hynde. Realy..

TylerDurden
Jul 17th, 2008, 06:41 PM
you should always carry around a piece of cow skin.
You could have walked up to her, and masturbated yourself with the cow skin, right in front of her.

HS the Whap
Jul 17th, 2008, 07:24 PM
Who the hell goes to school? LOL

what a fag.

TylerDurden
Jul 17th, 2008, 08:08 PM
i believe the real question is, who here still goes to HIGH SCHOOL... ahem


/me slaps hs in the face with kak

Burris
Jul 17th, 2008, 08:15 PM
The Pretenders were a pretty good band.

HS the Whap
Jul 17th, 2008, 08:17 PM
People here are still in High school? Holy shit.

TylerDurden
Jul 17th, 2008, 08:21 PM
i thought you were 18 and in high school hs :\

and wtf, can a wigga get a table dance ? yes ? no ?

HS the Whap
Jul 17th, 2008, 08:34 PM
If by 18 and in High School you mean 22 and graduated from college, then yes.

Puddle
Jul 17th, 2008, 10:39 PM
The Pretenders were a pretty good band.

Agree and I realy liked her songwriting. I'm not saying "Fuckem I'll never listen to her music again". The point is celebrities get ritch and pissy so they must protest about something. What pissed me off is hey I DIDN'T buy the coat and I ain't got millions of dollars and a butler to wipe my ass.
I graduated in 1987.

Steffmeister
Jul 17th, 2008, 11:00 PM
On a more serious note: The main flaw I see in your essay is that even if you try har don getting it fair, you still put too much negative on the protesters than the opposition.

Also, Ill be writing my esé now.

"Hi Maxey."

Maxey
Jul 18th, 2008, 12:12 AM
Hi Steff.

deceiver
Jul 18th, 2008, 04:03 AM
Hey Maxey, I forgot to ask you, your avatar really has a gay vibe...was it intentional?