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    Default Portfolio, need feedback!

    So, I'm gonna start ahead of most 3D students graduating in May from various 3d programs in Montreal and start the job search next week. I'm finalizing my portfolio this weekend and I need some feedback on it.

    What do you think about the content? Anything you think I should take out or re-order? Do you think the way I arranged categories are okay?

    "Come at me BROS" as Stroddy would say.

    Check it out here: jobyek.com
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    All you daughterfuckers bitching about this film need to punch yourself in the nuts and then run a dull power drill bit through both eyes before jumping into an industrial farm pigshit vat. You're gayer than a tanker truck full of HIV rolling over onto a San Francisco gay pride parade. You're dumber than a box of Stephensons. You don't deserve this movie. Screw you.

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    1) Buy a domain and at the very least forward it to that site.
    2) The Bren main picture thing annoys me as its mirrored, not showing each side
    3) The MP40 ingame shot could be better, very hard to see it.
    4) I'd drop the perfectly bilingual bit and just put English/French (Canadian) unless you speak proper French, according to a lot of Frenchies there are significant differences.
    5) Work experience stuff isn't necessarily worth writing about, if it is it should be in English as well.
    6) Watermark all your images, if companies take copies for reference they will have no idea where they have come from.
    7) The front HaJ splash image is a bit bleh compared to whats inside, even using the Thompson images you have would be more interesting.

    Other than its'arite!

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    It's shit. Go back to school

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    I like it. Looks sleek and doesn't beat around the bush. Hope you get hired dude, you show a lot of talent!

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    Need a full sized picture of the farm scene. Other wise its a pretty sexy website.

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    All look's very good to me if they don't like it fuck em.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ginger Lord View Post
    1) Buy a domain and at the very least forward it to that site.
    2) The Bren main picture thing annoys me as its mirrored, not showing each side
    3) The MP40 ingame shot could be better, very hard to see it.
    4) I'd drop the perfectly bilingual bit and just put English/French (Canadian) unless you speak proper French, according to a lot of Frenchies there are significant differences.
    5) Work experience stuff isn't necessarily worth writing about, if it is it should be in English as well.
    6) Watermark all your images, if companies take copies for reference they will have no idea where they have come from.
    7) The front HaJ splash image is a bit bleh compared to whats inside, even using the Thompson images you have would be more interesting.

    Other than its'arite!
    1) Anyone know a site that has a tut on that? I have absolutely no idea how to do that.
    2) shhhh
    3) I'll crop it more or see if I can get a better one today.
    4) Yup, I speak proper french and english =P.
    5) I thought so as well, but one of my good teachers said it's good to put it cause it shows you've already "worked" and can commit to something longer if it's been 1-2 years you've worked at some place.
    6) Yeah, I realised that afetr having most of them up already =X. Would you suggest just having the site name or just name and contact info?
    7) Aww, really? I've always found that MP40 render cool, but the Thompson does look better.


    Quote Originally Posted by Zirconium Blade View Post
    Need a full sized picture of the farm scene. Other wise its a pretty sexy website.
    Yeah, I already have one composited and all, but gotta tweak it later today, it'll be up there soon enough!
    All you daughterfuckers bitching about this film need to punch yourself in the nuts and then run a dull power drill bit through both eyes before jumping into an industrial farm pigshit vat. You're gayer than a tanker truck full of HIV rolling over onto a San Francisco gay pride parade. You're dumber than a box of Stephensons. You don't deserve this movie. Screw you.

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    I am pleased with all of it. To the point, wam, bam, thank you ma'am, ham and jam.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zirconium Blade View Post
    Need a full sized picture of the farm scene. Other wise its a pretty sexy website.
    Definitely this.

    I definitely think you need more large pictures in general too though. A lot of what you're showing on your site there looks like glorified thumbnails.

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    Can't go higher than that in res sadly =/, one of the disadvantages of the free option of carbonmade. For the small res I had (800px of width), I tried to go like what this dude did: for his 3D art: http://www.artbytucho.com/
    All you daughterfuckers bitching about this film need to punch yourself in the nuts and then run a dull power drill bit through both eyes before jumping into an industrial farm pigshit vat. You're gayer than a tanker truck full of HIV rolling over onto a San Francisco gay pride parade. You're dumber than a box of Stephensons. You don't deserve this movie. Screw you.

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